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    • #6270
      Temple01
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      So really getting into the DnB vibes this year and this i think has done me well learning something new with some of the synths i use and new stuff in Ableton especially chopping up stuff i by chance found that when i chop a sample up in simpler, can then convert it to a drum rack this is soo cool especially for vocal chops if want to pitch certain chops etc.. or for breaks, anyhows new track i been working on bit of a DnB meets Jazz vibe i guess your comments and advice always welcome thanks…T

    • #6282
      PR23
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      loving this!

      Personally I’d lose the jazzy trumpet? sample.  Nothing stands out mixwise, it’s all good! no comments really…At the end of my DJing years ( 98-2000) I was playing Jungle and Drum and bass,  so I like this.

      P.S. your kid’s track ‘Euphoria’ is cool! My daughter is learning piano and she really likes it, best of luck to him.

    • #6301
      Hushed Tones
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      Love this!

      Snare sounds a tiny bit loud. Perc at 2:06 is sharp to the ears a bit, maybe some peak EQ. Kick seems to be getting a bit lost during more beefy parts of the song. Pretty stoked about this tune, excellent job!!!

      • #6339
        Temple01
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        Hi Paul Thanks for listen i think you are right about that jazzy sax i will try something different think it needs to be a bit darker and more synth thanks for listen

        • #6340
          Temple01
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          Hi Alex Many thanks for the listen and pointers i will have a look at these for sure

    • #6443
      SCHEPPERZ
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      For me the saxophone works fine and I really enjoyed this track Tim – very well done. I do really think you’ve found your genre and your typical style fits so well with DnB. Mix wise pretty good sounding. Those stereo effects are a bit too loud compared to the saxophone but the overall vibe in this track implicit the producer had a lot of fun 🙂

      • #6507
        Temple01
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        Hi Micheal Thankyou for listening i did really enjoy this track and i kinda felt it needed some kinda horns/sax to play between those stab sounds to give interest i have tried to see if there is an alternative but i just keep feeling the sax on it so will prob keep them in, i want it to have a slight touch of something that just fits with the vibe, thanks for pointer i was using a new reverb on those stabs which i have turned down a bit as think they were a bit loud but its getting there, thanks for listening and help mate..T

    • #6528
      Temple01
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      Hi All bit of an update on this one, i addressed and few issues with the hats i made louder in mix slightly and some eq on hats and the dnb percs, i slightly lowered the snare vol too. I added a subtle sub bass to the Reese bass sound that comes in on drop 1 this i wanted to slightly strengthen the feel of this bass with more low end and very subtle distortion, i adjusted a few of the volumes on the synthy bass parts to make them more equal in the mix, i lowered the vol of the reverb FX on the stabs and adjusted these with the sax parts vol to. thanks for listen and help

      • #6551
        We Talk Music Online
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        Man that bass is good. Maybe the wrerm wrerm wop wop is to wide and feels a bit disconnected and loud compared to the rest.  But damn what a track, and the overall sound is really good

        • #6636
          Temple01
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          thanks Piv i will take a look at that part and try and make its sterio width. more central and bring it vol down a touch, i did actually bring this part up in vol from the 1st version but maybe i overcooked it a bit thanks for listen and help buddy ..T

        • #6638
          We Talk Music Online
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          So you perfectly understood the “wrerm wrerm wop wop” hahaha, It’s a great track and it was the only thing that was standing out

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