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Temple01 – Raize 174

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    • #5084
      Temple01
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      my next attempt at a bit of DnB haha!! after getting my studio all rebuilt i had started this a few weeks back but sometime off the studio gave me a chance to tune in to some DnB mixes etc.. and gave me good inspiration your thoughts on the mix and balance and anything would help as always thanks..T

    • #5212
      SCHEPPERZ
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      Hey Tim, that is a really cool track and I really enjoyed listening 🙂 Pretty impressive stuff I’d say compared to the sounds you typically produce. That stab-ish element around 0:45 is a bit harsh / loud in the mix. Also that kick could benefit from slightly more sidechaining (e.g. around 4:12 the kick sounds really good, as way fewer active elements). Cool effect around 3:49. Overall I think DnB could be your new genre 🙂

      • #5219
        Temple01
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        Thanks Michael that’s awesome I will look at these points I was thinking maybe it needs some stripping back in places I still learning a lot from this new music journey I really enjoying having a go at DnB and I think pos more fits my kinda style as in experimental thanks for listening buddy

    • #5218
      Hushed Tones
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      Hi Tim,

      Really enjoyed the track. Outstanding sound design, composition, interesting effects. I listened to it in the car, the mix sounded great. I have no notes, this ish slapzzzz

      • #5221
        Temple01
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        1. Hi Alex thankyou that’s great think I nearly there with this one few points to address thanks for listening buddy
    • #5224
      mr_melvis
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      Tim:

      I like this – the beginning has this ‘drug gangs moving through town gathering their members for the big fight scene’ movie kind of thing!  I thin that stab that starts at :45 is pretty in your face, could be toned down some.  Otherwise a pretty cool track Brother!  Nice work Tim!

    • #5547
      Ben Hunt
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      DnB definitely suits your style Tim, nothing stood out to me, souding great.

    • #5548
      Ben Hunt
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      DnB definitely suits your style Tim, nothing stood out to me, souding great.

    • #6269
      Temple01
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      Hi Ben and Todd many thanks for listening yeah i feel comfortable with DnB its quite an experimental genre which suits me thanks for listening in more trax to come

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