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Temple01 – China Threat

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- March 30, 2024 at 12:49 #7478
  
  Temple01
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  HI Guys
  
  So been playing about with this track i started in Live 12 been figuring out some of its new features i used the midi note stretch for the kick drum rolls i also had a play with the new performance pack where can control several parameters on one slider in this case i added a filter on both the main kick and the rolling kick to make the main kick filter down and the rolling kick filter up this was just me discovering stuff but as great potential any how any thought on mix /arrangement always welcome ..thanks all ..Tim
- April 1, 2024 at 11:52 #7493
  
  DEHN
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  Got no idea about the genre or those midi note stretches. All I know is that I really enjoyed the track.
  
  I think it sounded great in the mix, nothing didn’t really catch my attention, it was just flowing nicely.
  - April 1, 2024 at 13:09 #7494
    
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    thanks Piv i think i may slightly change the intro where the synth riser comes in first and replace that but its almost there had fun doing this one, thanks for listen and feedback
- April 3, 2024 at 15:15 #7524
  
  Ben Hunt
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  You’re really embracing the D&B Tim, sounds really good, love the main haunting riff.
  
  I was expecting more of a bass drop after the first riser at 0:44, so I’d tone the riser down a bit, but it looks like you mentioned doing something different there anyway.
  
  The gated riser and drum build up at 3:30 is great!
  
  Sounds like the tail has been cut off the end too, but easy fix. Great work.
- April 3, 2024 at 15:47 #7528
  
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  Thanks Ben yes i think i want to change the riser here as i dont want to repeat the first one in this intro area just needs something small for a que point etc.. that tail at the end do you mean the very last kick roll at the end of track ? thanks for listening and help 👍
- April 3, 2024 at 16:45 #7529
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  Very end of the track, the faded reverb cuts out too soon. Probably just need to extend the out point by a few seconds and export again.
  - This reply was modified 3 months, 3 weeks ago by Ben Hunt.
  - April 3, 2024 at 18:36 #7531
    
    Temple01
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    ahh thanks ben i will sort that
- April 3, 2024 at 20:17 #7532
  
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  Cool track Tim, nothing stood out in the mix, all good there. I like the crunchy snare sound you got! Agree with Ben on the first riser I also expected a bigger drop there..
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