Hey guys, here’s a new track of mine. Tried a slightly different worfklow approach this time but would be really happy about your fresh ears’ feedback on everything as always 🙂
First thing I noticed was the distorted rolling bass-line. Then you went dark techno on the subs and industrial Schepperz sound came back on the tops, and really nothing to put my finger on.
There is a BUT
I Actually think the last part that is less aggressive works better for this track. But this is down to my preference when Techno is fast. And not really something to do with your style.
HI Micheal Nice i like the deep kick on this at 0.20 the snare is tight too, good rise on the bleep sounds and they twist in their patterns fits well at 2.28 something did not feel right with them i realise they are going off time but it thru me off here, maybe just put the reverse on them here as you have at 2.33, that Kick comes in nice at 2.50 so solid, i like 3.40 it sounds like the release is opened on the bleep sound or some effex nice work mate
ok, favourite bit 4.35, i’d like that expanded more…just personal taste. mix sounds great, only thing I felt was the kick sounds a bit ‘clicky’ and almost harsh on the ears.
As always thanks a bunch for these detailed timestamp feedbacks Paul! Super helpful 🙌 I’ll give it a rest for some more couple days and then make an update. Thanks for your time:)
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