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mr_melvis – Dream State 5 V1

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last updated by AFL 6 months ago
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    • #4051
      mr_melvis
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      While I try to salvage Dream State 1, here’s one that came together pretty quickly and feels real good to me.  As always – any feedback is welcomed! https://on.soundcloud.com/cNeb3

    • #4057
      Hushed Tones
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      Truly a dreamy track. Snare and hats working really well. Strings are beautiful, piano progression has great emotion.

       

      Subjectively, there is either a pitch bend or glide on the bass that messes my ears up. It might also be note progression, I can’t really tel, but I do notice it.

       

      The double kick on the second drop also doesn’t work for me as it seems to skip and loses the smoothness.

       

      love this piece!

       

    • #4059
      mr_melvis
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      Thanks Brother!  No slides or pitch bend on the bass – but I’ll try to listen for what you are hearing and see what it might be.  Double kick easy to fix!  Thanks again my friend!

       

    • #4062
      The Matt Schulz
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      Oh my god, Alex has a face 😀

       

    • #4063
      The Matt Schulz
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      On to the track: love the jazzy drum set, really smooth. Really nice tune … there are some little flute like sounds here and there (3:10 for reference), they could come up 1 or 2db´s so they catch the reverb better … i really like this one, smooooth as butter

    • #4064
      The Matt Schulz
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      Also, just an idea: you could use that piano bit from the breaks somewhere in the beat section as well, like from 3:55 ish and then for like 16 bars, just adding a little extra spice

    • #4089
      AFL
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      Loving that pad sound, so dreamy for sure. I could use more thump to the kick but that might change the vibe to much (and I’m really nitpicking here). The piano sounds great and that bass is huge.

       

      Nice track man

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