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    • #5718
      DJWhaters
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      So I thought I would start a new track called England (I think it might change names) V1 WIP, progress so far, levels need sorting I know and the kicks are not 100% yet but see what we think

      I am trying to create that epic uplifting soundtrack

    • #5757
      SCHEPPERZ
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      I like that first sketch Ian – the only thing that stood out for me is that pretty dominant clap (starting at 0:39). And maybe something new in the second part. A more clear peak section would be nice. My 2 cents:)

      • #5777
        DJWhaters
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        Thanks, Mate for listening, I am working on an update tonight, doing the side chaining and bringing some new elements into it.

    • #5791
      DEHN
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      Only thing I found was that the vocals can come down. I know you like them loud, but they dont need to be this loud to be really loud 🙂
      Great track, a bit more down to earth than your normal stuff

    • #5803
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      I have a super difficult time with hardstyle, but I gotta say, the vocal choice is dope. I feel like the pad at 1:18 doesn’t sit right in the song. It confuses my ears, but it sounds lush af. I love the musical part, I’m just confused rhythmically.

      • #5866
        DJWhaters
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        Thanks mate – yeah like i said levels are everywhere at the moment, this is just the first version to see if people liked the idea, i also think at the 1.55ish point i need some sort of uplifting new euphoric melody to kick in but playing with that idea

      • #5867
        DJWhaters
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        Thanks, Mate, yeah it’s a difficult one this one and I have to agree with you on the pad, i think it is a tad out of sync and thank you for at least try to listen to it as i know it’s not easy fr everyone being harder styles

    • #6125
      DJWhaters
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      Ok I have changed the front end so it has that epic feel to it (I hope tell me if I am wrong though)

      Made it more dramatic and patriotic sounding, brought the vocals down somewhat and changed a few of them, changed the kicks, having less distortion and more punch so they appeal more to a wider crowd as not typical FC this more Hardcore, added new hats, claps and crashes and ride, more flow from the fem cinematic vocal hits and finally toned the piano a bit better.

      Any feedback is greatly appreciated

      • #6135
        DEHN
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        So I think all in the music sounds tight. I still think the vocals are drowning things too much. They are louder than the kick in perceived loudness, take it a tiny bit further down and the mix is there.

    • #6172
      DJWhaters
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      Thanks @DEHN  Final set of English Vocal Quotes are now added (a bit of tweaking to do on them but nothing major)

      Original Vocals brought down a touch

    • #6240
      Temple01
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      Hi Ian i like this it will go down well when we win the European cup haha, the vocals sound much clearer in the revised version i think in this style getting the balance of vocals must be difficult but they sound good to a deaf Englishman here, the King will be proud sir !! nice work mate

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