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dshoka – guilt

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    • #4484
      dshoka
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      Trying this again in the right place, please bear with me. Here‘s some downtempo breakbeat electro inspired by hard times. Have no idea how the levels sound as I need some new listening gear, I’m winging it just to stay productive and utilize emotionally driven ambition. If it sounds like crap at least I made something if anything. Any helping ears and opinions are appreciated.

       

    • #4485
      Denats
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      hey mate, I think the link hasn’t displayed correctly. I can’t play the track.

       

    • #4487
      dshoka
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      Links not working here, maybe it’s not meant to be shared

    • #4488
      Denats
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      Are you sharing one of the shortened soundcloud links I “think” theres an issue with those. Using the “copy Link” button has worked for me:

    • #4489
      AFL
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      Managed to listen to this via the FB link and damn it’s great. I’ll find a way to get this posted in here for the others to hear and will try to leave some feedback tomorrow.

       

       

    • #4497
      We Talk Music Online
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      It’s because he posted the phone link with all the bells and whistles that comes with those links

       

      • #4548
        AFL
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        The work around I found for that when posting mine from my phone, though it was a pain, was to open SoundCloud in browser rather than the app (the pain was it kept trying to open the app lol) and copy the link there.

         

         

        • #4555
          We Talk Music Online
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          Working on getting our own upload in here, should solve the problem 🙂

    • #4499
      SCHEPPERZ
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      Hey mate, that’s a cool first sketch. Yeah the levels aren’t there yet. Especially that clap / snare in the first half and those bass stabs and some percs here and there. What you can do temporarily with even cheap headphones is to switch to mono and listening to the mix with the quietest volume possible and mix from there. That’s what I am doing with my 20 bucks JBL headphones if I don’t want to use Sonarworks.

    • #4549
      AFL
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      Really digging this track. You can really feel the emotion in it.

      The chords are great with their slow attack and the occasional keys add something perfect to the vibe.

      For the kick I’d like more presence in the higher end, like more “knock”. They have good thump and low end. Same with the snare I feel like it could use a little more fullness, if that makes sense.

      The 808 bass is tight and I really like that extra bass synth that comes in a bit later in the track.

      The use of the Vanilla Ice vocal is cool, took me a min to place it until I heard him say collaborate lol

      Great work though, excited to here more.

    • #4583
      Denats
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      Just had a listen, really great idea and lots of potential. Bit of work just getting everything in the right space / levelm will really help.

       

      Nice work man

    • #4702
      mr_melvis
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      The vibe of the track is very cool – slightly dangerous feel, dark…  I think when you address levels and mix issues, this is gonna be a really great track, no BS!  Keep Going – work with what you have – talent wins over tech!

    • #5116
      Temple01
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      Hi liking this has a great vibe i like the string part sounds good, nice beats to and the vocals fit well i like its simplicity as a song but it works very well good work mate..T

       

    • #5634
      The Matt Schulz
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      This is a vibe … simple and delicious. So, the levels are obviously not correct, BUT: as soon as you got proper listening gear again, don´t fiddle too much with it, because in parts it is the raw and unpolished vibe which makes this great … vocal still could use some fx though, it stands out quite dry against the rest, to me at least 🙂

       

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