…and so am I. It’s been a funky start to this year with work, so I’ve not had the time nor inspiration to make any music. Bummer.
Finally finished something that’s worth getting feedback on. Tribal Deep House would be the genre if you had to pin me down.
Open to any and all thoughts on structure, sound, mixing etc. Is this one ready?
Hey Scott, welcome back! I love the work on the percussion the most. Really good groove overall 👍 The low end has proper meat. I get what Ian means by the vocals being too thin, it has a touch of sounding too hollow. Wished it would be also more clear, what they’re saying (as it’s the main player for me). There are some elements fighting for space here and there (e.g. 4:29 when the vocal, synth and the pad are playing at the same time. So in short a bit of work in the tonal balance and on the vocal. Hope that helps 🙂 P.S. Missing some good old Kenada detuning 😁 P.P.S Best to keep the updates in this forum thread instead of the public feed, as it gets lost fast.
Great groove and percussion work. Love the gated synth (at least assume its that) at 2.05ish.
I found the kick a bit knocky (that seems to be a bugbear of mine at the moment, so take that with a pinch of salt) but it seems to clash a bit with some of the other percs, so a bit of eq work on one or the other could help. Arrangment-wise its totally there.
Hey Scott good to see you back buddy liking this track the percussion is great i can here what Ben has suggested about the kick maybe it has too much click something a bit deeper may work this track has a nice deep house feel the bass is nice i like the gated synths too really fits well nice work mate..T
Hey Guys, really appreciate the notes, sorry about the absence and slow reply. Yep, the kick was off, I made some edits to that, the vocals and the mix in general. Pretty happy with where I landed here.
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