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Hale Bopp – Zwen Bleach Remix

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    • #7570
      Zwen Bleach
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      Started with a comment from someone on my previous track that it had a “der dritte raum” feeling.

      Well that got stuck in my head and I listened to Hale Bopp a lot and decided I wanted to make a remix 🙂

      Still an early version, needs more work, what do you think?

    • #7571
      AFL
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      Nice groove and layers to the arp. There is this really cool lower synth sound playing in that that I would love to hear more of.

      Nice additions of the perc at :59, makes a good change up. It might be a little loud in the mix but it doesn’t bother me.

      Very cool synth work throughout. Around 2:15 to 2:28. And that transition sound right at 2:28 is awesome. I’d almost love to hear that when no heat, just that sound and then slam the best back in.

      Nice work man, looking forward to more.

       

    • #7575
      Zwen Bleach
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      Thanks for listening and the feedback AFL

      I’m exited about this one and couldn’t stop working on it 🙂

      here is a long version, think it’s close to finished, sounds good to me now as it is, will need to let my ears rest now

      ps. the transition sound is added a couple of times, to transition and in the drop 😉

       

    • #7577
      SCHEPPERZ
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      Sounding good to me overall 👍  For my taste the kick could cut through mix a bit more and the synth instead a bit quieter. I also find the clap sounds a bit dry and gets a touch too repetitive until that long break (which itself was a tad too long for me, but that’s the genre I guess). I hoped for something unique in the second half as it almost sounded identical prior the long break, but I am really super picky. The second time I am now listening to, it gets harder to find something to improve. In short maybe some shifts in tonal balance and slightly more sidechaining on the kick. Hope that helps 🙂 Good stuff!

    • #7580
      Zwen Bleach
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      Will have a listen to that kick, had a similar comment in my previous track also, I guess it’s my setup. The dry clap is a reference to the original, had it wet in the beginning but for interaction with the famous melody didn’t work. Now listening in the morning the intro to the break is a bit long, the break itself I kinda like long (I always do long break) but I will shorten the intro to the break, think that will help.

      Thanks for listening and for the feedback Schepperz, much appreciated!

    • #7624
      Zwen Bleach
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      so, I’m still exited!!!

      a lot has changed to track

      – kick + sidechain

      – melody now in different parts : intro + mid section + outro1 + outro2

      – added extra element in the end

      – adjusted clap

      – mini break

      – some rearragements

      So it should be better now in storytelling, less repetitive in melody and more groovy 🙂

      Hoping for some of your good ears to get me to the moon!

       

       

       

      • #7625
        DEHN
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        Very true to the original track. I’m so lucky to have experienced it live a few times. I think the mix is spot on, sounds like the original with the muddy mids that fits perfectly the moment the synths begin to cycle around the beat.

        So as a fan of this evergreen track and have listened and played it as dj countless times, I would say this is done.

    • #7627
      SCHEPPERZ
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      Great update mate – done 🤘

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