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last updated by Temple01 3 weeks ago
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    • #10228
      Temple01
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      Hey all been quiet music wise and been working on other styles i had started this a while back and thought i would come back to it for a break from the other stuff haha !! still working on it i think the first half needs a bit more tension leading to the break and a bit of arrangement work here and there been playing about with a few new toys like thermal vst and the new infiltrator 2 which has been great fun your thoughts and idea’s always welcome thanks for listening and feedback chaps

       

       

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    • #10231
      Temple01
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      ok bit of an update to the original i changed up the vocals and some more work

       

    • #10233
      SCHEPPERZ
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      Hey Tim, the groove in that track is awesome! The intro is great but could be a tad louder (0:12 quieter though). The first time listening I wished at 0:45 the kick as well but now the third time I am listening it’s ok the way it is. Ear fatigue already struck 🙂 The riser at 2:02 is really cool. At 2:26 there is a click / pop sound. I somehow wished for a “time keeper” element during the break to keep the head nodding alive:) It’s really interesting that now listening the 3rd time the second half of the track feels coherent. First impression was more being the second half could be a track of its own. Mostly I guess because of the vocal. I do also think the vocals could come down a bit and / or the kick needs more sidechaining. In the beginning it’s clearly audible but the kick gets drown at some sections. And there another click/pop sound between 3:26 – 3:27. Hope that helps. Cool track Tim. P.S. Lovely teeth

      • #10234
        Temple01
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        Thanks Michael i think you are defo right on the kick issue it needs to punch thru more in areas and sidechain adjustments on some elements i think, thanks for spotting those pops i will address these, i was wondering maybe too much vocal in this track maybe i need to strip back to a more simple theme here

        thanks buddy…T

    • #10250
      Ben Hunt
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      Fantastic sound design on this Tim! Dig the vocals.

      Only thing missing for me was some clearer transitions into and out of the breakdown, I think the string section at 2:22 ish feel a bit abrupt and you could use the same string as a riser going into the break to soften its entrance. Also felt like a crash would help when the breat drops at 3:08 to give it a bit more impact.

      Both are really small things, I think otherwise this sounds pretty much there to me. Great work, you’re getting really into the dnb at the moment and it totally suits your style.

      • #10280
        Temple01
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        Hey Ben hope u well and thanku for feedback some great points I will look at need to get back on this

      • #10281
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        Hey Ben hope u well and thanku for feedback some great points I will look at need to get back on this

      • #10282
        Temple01
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        Hey Ben hope u well and thanku for feedback some great points I will look at need to get back on this

      • #10283
        Temple01
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        Hey Ben hope u well and thanku for feedback some great points I will look at need to get back on this

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