Side Project – The Eternal Now (Demo Version)
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Hi People! Sorry, I posted this in the wrong place. It’s a demo version of a track I’ve been working on with a very good friend of mine. Progressive techno/trance (kind of!), C minor, 124 bpm. I would love to hear your thoughts, especially on sound selection and structure. 🙂
The track needs better mastering, it’s lacking in low end at the moment but I’ll fix that.
I think it works great with structure. A few changes and it will be spot on, sounds are also good, but I’m having trouble getting into the groove when the bass is lagging. When that gets properly mixed in I’m sure its spot on. But sub needs to be fixed in the mix, not mastering. It can be done in mastering, But it will be 10x times better if it is done in the mix.
But the track is pretty good. I would maybe just go for a more simple structure for this type of music, with the approx 2 minutes start, the break, the main with 2 minutes, a small break, and then the 1-2 minutes out.
Looking forward to hear the next version
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