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PR23 – Breakthrough V1

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last updated by AFL 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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    • #8128
      Temple01
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      hi Paul Like the 303 bass line in this has nice rhythm, the kick is solid this is thumping i like , i think the hats/snare could pos come out to cut thru slightly as the bass is very dominant maybe they need to be louder a touch and raise the high end freq on the hats, this is a great track i enjoyed ..T

       

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      Hey Paul, yeah I’m with Tim about the bass’ level. But I really like that dirty kick from the get go 🤘 The kick itself would smack a bit more with some dynamic eq around 250 Hz. The best section of that track was when the new synth / sound came around 4:11 (which I think could have been 4 – 8 bars earlier in snippets maybe, or would be slowly filtered in). And for the icing I think a snare/clap in the last third could really give another climax section before ending the track. The track has really a very solid foundation and is worth finishing for sure. Cool production Paul! P.S. I also wished the break at 2:08 around 4-8 bars longer 🙂

      • #8498
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        Cheers Tim, a few tweaks and I think it will be done.

         

        • #8499
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          Thanks Michael, relistened today after a pause to get some perspective, a few changes to make . I did have that break longer at first so I may extend it!

           

    • #8198
      Zach
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      This one had me moving and grooving in the studio.  It sounds to me like the high end is lacking though.  Perhaps boost the highs on the hats, or maybe add some white noise sweeps here and there to fill out that top space.  The lead at 4:11 is super cool, but I think it’d build more anticipation if you teased it just a little throughout the first half.

    • #9766
      AFL
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      Always love the acid style, 303s FTW.

      I agree with Mike, the high end feels a little subdued maybe. Otherwise this is bangin.

       

      Really like the transformation in the synth around 4:13

       

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