Believe it or not, this started out as a UK garage tune and, through more iterations than I care to mention, morphed into a 4/4 techno roller. How’s it hanging together?
When the melody starts the sounds begins to crush, so you might wanna look into that. The track structure wise is really good, I do feel the sound of the melody is a bit detached to this heavy beat. And I would fiddle around with it to get a bit more dirty sound for it. It feels to happy for this minimal tech groovve.
Cheers Piv,
On the crush, you mean the saturation is maxing out when the melody comes in? Might try an edgier sound, was initially going for a juxtaposition – but it might to too far removed from the deeper driving beat.
Thx a bunch!
For the melody thing you could try dropping the octave by 1 to see if that suited the vibe. I think it’s sounds great as it is, it’s kind of this juxtaposition with the other sounds.
Otherwise nothing else really sticks out to me, I put this on in my headphones and for the longest time just vibed to the beat.
Good stuff!
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